i love it, it is so cute! it shows the relationship between them. I love how fionna look at marshall and how marshall looks at fionna it looks like he is protecting her. the drawing its really good, I like the colors and I think it is really real, it really shows emotion and it is kind of different from the others. I think the technique that you used its great because it gives the drawing an effect that make it different. it is a really cool drawing, I like it really much and I hope you continue doing this and becoming better. it is really good, congratulations.
Absalutly amazing. i belive you will make it big one day.!! (I am not use to writting critiques) TROLOOLOOLOOLOLOLOLOLOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOLOLOLOL ol ol ol ol o l ol ol o l ol o l ol ol o o o oo l olol ol l o o l ol ol ol o lo l ol ol ol o lo l ol ol o o o l ol ol ol ol o o l ol ol ol ol o ol ol ollo ol ol olol ol ol ol lo lo lo olol olololol ol ol ol oo o lo l ol ol o ol l olo l o